Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Group Critique forms















This past Friday (26th Feb 2015) we had done a group critique; we explained the ideas we had come up with, then wrote ideas to research or progress into to continue with our project… thus giving me the Lemmy gravestone idea From my tutor. 


It was suggested to me that as the pictures are out of focus that I type them out instead.

Name of Critique: Shiam (Tutor)
- maya piece
- Graveyards
- simple 
- Tribute to Lemmy 
- Jack Daniels and candle?

Name of critique: Bren
- Graveyards
- Look up gravestones
- Don't over complicate things

Name Of Critique: Connor Dutson
- Research Gravestones

Name Of Critique: Adam
- interesting design
- Maybe a candle or something as a tribute to someone

Name of critique: Kane
- Modelling Gravestone
- Moonlight?

Name Of Critique: Jordan
- illumination of the moon

Name of critique: Jacob
- Explore different gravestones
- Keep Camera on the ground

Name of critique: Ben
- show eroding  to the gravestone model 
- research Highgate Cemetery In London
- Look at big gravestones
- Keep the model simple
- have a horror theme
- show highlighting in Final Model
- simple is best

3 comments:

  1. Critique sheets
    Annotate and talk about what ideas you are going to take forward to develop.

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  3. make sure that these are in focus, type out if need be.

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